bear pun 08 ↨ text / action for MORNING RESCUE I mean Souji Rescue Team

[bearclaw]

it's finally started!!

i worked really long and tirelesly on this plot, but it's finally finished!! this is teddie's debut as a Johto manga artiste! I'm making the big leagues! it's been a little hard to draw with all the outside pressure and expectations, but I've finally broken free from my artistic bonds and produced something!

A tale of love, sorrow, and betrayal! a drama of epic proportions!!! romeo and juliet... with bears! Johto, I bring you...



This! I say "this" because it doesn't actually have a title yet, hehe. oh, yeah, is this the part where I say this is copyright teddie? i dunno, I see that around a lot.

I'm really excited!

oh yeah, almost forgot that disclaimer thing everyone does. "Any relations to living people is purely coincidental". is that right?

anyway, I'll leave you all with this cliffhanger!!

Comments

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[restardom.livejournal.com]

We won't know if we don't try!!

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[usedrawr.livejournal.com]

R--right!

[putting all of his pages in a special little folder, labeled "teddie-sama and the evil jiraiya".]


So, um... [how to ask this.]

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[restardom.livejournal.com]

What?

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[usedrawr.livejournal.com]

[bashful pause. oh, now he's turning all red in embearrassment.]



What'd you think?

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[restardom.livejournal.com]

...

It's pretty good art, actually.

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[usedrawr.livejournal.com]

R--really?!

[THE BEST COMPLIMENT ;A;]

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[restardom.livejournal.com]

But you really need to work on it.

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[usedrawr.livejournal.com]

[... oh damnit. deflated hopes.]

R.. really...

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[restardom.livejournal.com]

The characters are obvious, I don't really... get the story...

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[usedrawr.livejournal.com]

I--It's just the beginning! You know, you start with a big event so everyone goes "oh, who's that dashing hero!" After that, you introduce your hero in his regular clothes, wooing all the ladies on the street! The climb... before the huge drop!

Um, at least... that's usually it.

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[restardom.livejournal.com]

Do you usually introduce the villain so early on, though?

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[usedrawr.livejournal.com]

It's dramatic effect. [now he's taking out another sheet of paper.]

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[restardom.livejournal.com]

It also means Yosuke-senpai's gonna try and turn you into a throw pillow from page one...

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[usedrawr.livejournal.com]

M-maybe he won't! I-I mean, there's a disclaimer an--

[nope, nope.]

. . . Urp. I guess there are the downsides to a tale of excitement, bears, and fuzzy love.

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[restardom.livejournal.com]

... Juuust a few.

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[usedrawr.livejournal.com]

. . .

Do you think he'll be really, really mad?

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[restardom.livejournal.com]

On the bright side, if he screams too loud, Chie-senpai will probably shut him up.

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[usedrawr.livejournal.com]

Huh.

If she kicks him, I should get a picture! That was I have some reference. [just this face.]

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[restardom.livejournal.com]

I bet it'd be an interesting face he'd make...

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[usedrawr.livejournal.com]

Prroooobably. It might look a little like...

[and now he is imitating an utter look of pain.]

This!

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[restardom.livejournal.com]

That looks about right!

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[usedrawr.livejournal.com]

Yeah! I think I'm all ready to draw that face!

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[restardom.livejournal.com]

Good luck!

... And so something about the rest of the characters.

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[usedrawr.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[oh. another hesitant pause.]

. . . what is it, Rise-chan?

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[restardom.livejournal.com]

Change the designs. And the names.